{"id":663837,"date":"2018-09-12T09:00:48","date_gmt":"2018-09-12T16:00:48","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/newed.any0.dpdns.org\/en-us\/research\/?post_type=msr-blog-post&#038;p=663837"},"modified":"2020-06-02T17:37:02","modified_gmt":"2020-06-03T00:37:02","slug":"writing-for-impact-five-tips-for-simpler-user-research-writing","status":"publish","type":"msr-blog-post","link":"https:\/\/newed.any0.dpdns.org\/en-us\/research\/articles\/writing-for-impact-five-tips-for-simpler-user-research-writing\/","title":{"rendered":"Writing for impact: Five tips for simpler user research writing"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>By <a class=\"msr-external-link glyph-append glyph-append-open-in-new-tab glyph-append-xsmall\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\" target=\"_blank\" href=\"https:\/\/www.linkedin.com\/in\/dylanromero\/\">Dylan Romero<span class=\"sr-only\"> (opens in new tab)<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_663840\" style=\"width: 2010px\" class=\"wp-caption alignnone\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-663840\" class=\"wp-image-663840 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/newed.any0.dpdns.org\/en-us\/research\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/06\/Better-User-Resarch-Writing.jpeg\" alt=\"Different colored pencils arranged in a single line\" width=\"2000\" height=\"1500\" srcset=\"https:\/\/newed.any0.dpdns.org\/en-us\/research\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/06\/Better-User-Resarch-Writing.jpeg 2000w, https:\/\/newed.any0.dpdns.org\/en-us\/research\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/06\/Better-User-Resarch-Writing-300x225.jpeg 300w, https:\/\/newed.any0.dpdns.org\/en-us\/research\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/06\/Better-User-Resarch-Writing-1024x768.jpeg 1024w, https:\/\/newed.any0.dpdns.org\/en-us\/research\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/06\/Better-User-Resarch-Writing-768x576.jpeg 768w, https:\/\/newed.any0.dpdns.org\/en-us\/research\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/06\/Better-User-Resarch-Writing-1536x1152.jpeg 1536w, https:\/\/newed.any0.dpdns.org\/en-us\/research\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/06\/Better-User-Resarch-Writing-80x60.jpeg 80w, https:\/\/newed.any0.dpdns.org\/en-us\/research\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/06\/Better-User-Resarch-Writing-240x180.jpeg 240w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 2000px) 100vw, 2000px\" \/><p id=\"caption-attachment-663840\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Note: This article was originally published on September 12, 2018, on Medium<\/p><\/div>\n<h2 id=\"ac5d\" class=\"fj er bo bk bj dt fk fl fv fm fn fw fo fp fx fq fr fy fs ft fz fu\">How to write user research reports people actually want to read<\/h2>\n<div class=\"ga\">\n<div class=\"n gb gc gd ge\">\n<div class=\"o n\">\n<p id=\"abc7\" class=\"jm jy cf bk jo b fk jp jz fm jq ka jr js fx jt ju fy jv jw fz jx ek\" data-selectable-paragraph=\"\">I could\u2019ve titled this \u201cHow to Eschew Obfuscation in UR Writing\u201d and achieved the same meaning, but would it add any value? How many people would get lost trying to flip to the right page in their mental dictionary to define \u201ceschew\u201d and \u201cobfuscation\u201d?<\/p>\n<p id=\"ae20\" class=\"jm jy cf bk jo b fk jp jz fm jq ka jr js fx jt ju fy jv jw fz jx ek\" data-selectable-paragraph=\"\">Likewise, you probably know what \u201cUR\u201d means \u2014 you\u2019re reading an article about user research, after all. But for writers, designers, or those who accidentally click-stumbled here, \u201cUR\u201d isn\u2019t so obvious. A Bing search for \u201cUR acronym meaning\u201d returns this:<\/p>\n<p data-selectable-paragraph=\"\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-663846 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/newed.any0.dpdns.org\/en-us\/research\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/09\/Image_2-Writing-for-Impact.png\" alt=\"Images of the city UR, with a definition about it's origin\" width=\"946\" height=\"1015\" srcset=\"https:\/\/newed.any0.dpdns.org\/en-us\/research\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/09\/Image_2-Writing-for-Impact.png 946w, https:\/\/newed.any0.dpdns.org\/en-us\/research\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/09\/Image_2-Writing-for-Impact-280x300.png 280w, https:\/\/newed.any0.dpdns.org\/en-us\/research\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/09\/Image_2-Writing-for-Impact-768x824.png 768w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 946px) 100vw, 946px\" \/><\/p>\n<p data-selectable-paragraph=\"\">To really eschew all that pesky obfuscation, it\u2019s much simpler to be simple.\u00a0The same can be said for most everything below the title \u2014 and not just in research writing. Without further ado, here are five tips for writing simple, impactful study results, with the UR (not the ancient city) to back them up.<\/p>\n<h3 id=\"83ca\" class=\"kd ke cf bk bj kf et kg ev kh ki kj kk kl km kn ko\"><strong class=\"ay\">1. Write for scanning<\/strong><\/h3>\n<p id=\"25ff\" class=\"jm jy cf bk jo b fk kp jz fm kq ka jr kr fx jt ks fy jv kt fz jx ek\" data-selectable-paragraph=\"\">People don\u2019t read. This is especially true when it comes to the web, where\u00a0<a class=\"bx cv ji jj jk jl\" href=\"https:\/\/www.nngroup.com\/articles\/horizontal-attention-leans-left\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener nofollow noreferrer\">skimming content instead of reading<\/a> is most prevalent. Your target audience isn\u2019t reading study results for the plot and great character development; they\u2019re searching for insights to help improve a product or fortify a hypothesis they have about their customers.<\/p>\n<p id=\"a95a\" class=\"jm jy cf bk jo b fk jp jz fm jq ka jr js fx jt ju fy jv jw fz jx ek\" data-selectable-paragraph=\"\">So write for the PM who\u2019s wading through a sea of studies at 10:30 at night, trying to find accessibility recommendations for their spec. Assist them in their hunt for keywords, patterns, and clear, actionable recommendations.<\/p>\n<p id=\"34a7\" class=\"jm jy cf bk jo b fk jp jz fm jq ka jr js fx jt ju fy jv jw fz jx ek\" data-selectable-paragraph=\"\">Speaking of keywords\u2026<\/p>\n<h3 id=\"f771\" class=\"kd ke cf bk bj kf et kg ev kh ki kj kk kl km kn ko\"><strong>2. Create searchable content<\/strong><\/h3>\n<p id=\"af1e\" class=\"jm jy cf bk jo b fk kp jz fm kq ka jr kr fx jt ks fy jv kt fz jx ek\" data-selectable-paragraph=\"\">Writing for scanning becomes even more important in the context of search results. People need to be able to find your report in your company\u2019s internal database. As Jakob Nielsen of Nielsen Norman Group\u00a0<a class=\"bx cv ji jj jk jl\" href=\"https:\/\/www.nngroup.com\/articles\/seo-and-usability\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener nofollow noreferrer\">notes<\/a>: \u201cJust because employees are using an internal company information space doesn\u2019t mean they change their main information-seeking behaviors.\u201d<\/p>\n<p id=\"d7ac\" class=\"jm jy cf bk jo b fk jp jz fm jq ka jr js fx jt ju fy jv jw fz jx ek\" data-selectable-paragraph=\"\">A list of search results amplifies scanning behavior as people attempt to pick out what\u2019s relevant to them. To capitalize on this habit, help make sure the right results appear on the screen in the first place. Try:<\/p>\n<ul class=\"\">\n<li id=\"a89d\" class=\"jm jy cf bk jo b fk jp jz fm jq ka jr js fx jt ju fy jv jw fz jx ku kv kw\" data-selectable-paragraph=\"\">Being\u00a0<a class=\"bx cv ji jj jk jl\" href=\"https:\/\/www.nngroup.com\/articles\/legibility-readability-comprehension\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener nofollow noreferrer\">concise<\/a><\/li>\n<li id=\"ca5e\" class=\"jm jy cf bk jo b fk kx jz fm ky ka jr kz fx jt la fy jv lb fz jx ku kv kw\" data-selectable-paragraph=\"\">Front-loading key info<\/li>\n<li id=\"4f32\" class=\"jm jy cf bk jo b fk kx jz fm ky ka jr kz fx jt la fy jv lb fz jx ku kv kw\" data-selectable-paragraph=\"\">Giving readers actionable content<\/li>\n<li id=\"dee3\" class=\"jm jy cf bk jo b fk kx jz fm ky ka jr kz fx jt la fy jv lb fz jx ku kv kw\" data-selectable-paragraph=\"\">Avoiding acronyms and\u00a0<a class=\"bx cv ji jj jk jl\" href=\"https:\/\/www.nngroup.com\/articles\/web-writing-use-search-keywords\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener nofollow noreferrer\">jargon<\/a><\/li>\n<li id=\"3f19\" class=\"jm jy cf bk jo b fk kx jz fm ky ka jr kz fx jt la fy jv lb fz jx ku kv kw\" data-selectable-paragraph=\"\">Including\u00a0<a class=\"bx cv ji jj jk jl\" href=\"https:\/\/www.nngroup.com\/articles\/presenting-bulleted-lists\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener nofollow noreferrer\">bulleted and numbered lists<\/a>, where applicable\u2014just like this one<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h3 id=\"75c0\" class=\"kd ke cf bk bj kf et kg ev kh ki kj kk kl km kn ko\"><strong class=\"ay\">3. Make your first 11 characters count<\/strong><\/h3>\n<p id=\"14cc\" class=\"jm jy cf bk jo b fk kp jz fm kq ka jr kr fx jt ks fy jv kt fz jx ek\" data-selectable-paragraph=\"\">Eye-tracking studies show you have about 11 characters to capture someone\u2019s attention. Not words; <em class=\"lc\">characters<\/em>.<\/p>\n<p id=\"2659\" data-selectable-paragraph=\"\">Apply that to the verbose alternative title I suggested for this article and you get \u201cHow to Esch-\u201d, which sounds more like an informal class on creating trippy, math-based art like M.C. Escher. To avoid confusion, don\u2019t bury the lede. This not only helps searchability, but it also aligns with the way people naturally scan the web for content.<\/p>\n<h3 id=\"457c\" class=\"kd ke cf bk bj kf et kg ev kh ki kj kk kl km kn ko\"><strong class=\"ay\">4. Tell a story<\/strong><\/h3>\n<p id=\"9077\" class=\"jm jy cf bk jo b fk kp jz fm kq ka jr kr fx jt ks fy jv kt fz jx ek\" data-selectable-paragraph=\"\">Once you\u2019ve hooked readers with those first few crucial characters, it\u2019s time to tell your compelling data story.\u00a0Without a hook, a great story becomes a puzzle the reader is forced to solve.<\/p>\n<p id=\"df6d\" data-selectable-paragraph=\"\">Even in the complex, sometimes, tedious world of law, there\u2019s been a push to <a class=\"msr-external-link glyph-append glyph-append-open-in-new-tab glyph-append-xsmall\" href=\"https:\/\/plainlanguage.gov\/resources\/articles\/elements-of-plain-language\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">simplify and organize language<span class=\"sr-only\"> (opens in new tab)<\/span><\/a>\u00a0by putting \u201c\u2026the more important before the less important, the general before the specific, and the ordinary before the extraordinary.\u201d<\/p>\n<p id=\"7458\" data-selectable-paragraph=\"\">If your audience can\u2019t quickly decipher your observations and insights, they may never get to the specific, extraordinary results that complete a study\u2019s story.<\/p>\n<h3 id=\"379d\" class=\"kd ke cf bk bj kf et kg ev kh ki kj kk kl km kn ko\"><strong class=\"ay\">5. Know your audience<\/strong><\/h3>\n<p id=\"e480\" class=\"jm jy cf bk jo b fk kp jz fm kq ka jr kr fx jt ks fy jv kt fz jx ek\" data-selectable-paragraph=\"\">Context matters. Whether it\u2019s that weary PM filling out a spec before bedtime, a partner who speaks (and reads) English as a second language, or a writer with only a basic understanding of the difference between qualitative and quantitative data (*cough*), your content needs to be accessible to your audience.\u00a0Clear, plain language benefits\u00a0<a class=\"msr-external-link glyph-append glyph-append-open-in-new-tab glyph-append-xsmall\" href=\"https:\/\/www.nngroup.com\/articles\/plain-language-experts\/?utm_source=Alertbox&utm_campaign=4c8622ac0d-ux_lessons_plain_language_2017_10_09&utm_medium=email&utm_term=0_7f29a2b335-4c8622ac0d-24301565\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">consumers and experts alike<span class=\"sr-only\"> (opens in new tab)<\/span><\/a>.<\/p>\n<p id=\"1c92\" class=\"jm jy cf bk jo b fk jp jz fm jq ka jr js fx jt ju fy jv jw fz jx ek\" data-selectable-paragraph=\"\">On the consumer side, the\u00a0<a class=\"bx cv ji jj jk jl\" href=\"http:\/\/simplicityindex.com\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener nofollow noreferrer\">Siegel+Gale Global Simplicity Index<\/a>\u00a0quantifies just how much there is to gain through brands simplifying their products and services.<\/p>\n<p data-selectable-paragraph=\"\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone wp-image-663849 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/newed.any0.dpdns.org\/en-us\/research\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/09\/Image-3_Writing-for-Impact.png\" alt=\"A chart showing the Global Brand Simplicity Index\" width=\"2000\" height=\"1102\" srcset=\"https:\/\/newed.any0.dpdns.org\/en-us\/research\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/09\/Image-3_Writing-for-Impact.png 2000w, https:\/\/newed.any0.dpdns.org\/en-us\/research\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/09\/Image-3_Writing-for-Impact-300x165.png 300w, https:\/\/newed.any0.dpdns.org\/en-us\/research\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/09\/Image-3_Writing-for-Impact-1024x564.png 1024w, https:\/\/newed.any0.dpdns.org\/en-us\/research\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/09\/Image-3_Writing-for-Impact-768x423.png 768w, https:\/\/newed.any0.dpdns.org\/en-us\/research\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/09\/Image-3_Writing-for-Impact-1536x846.png 1536w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 2000px) 100vw, 2000px\" \/><\/p>\n<p id=\"5813\" class=\"jm jy cf bk jo b fk jp jz fm jq ka jr js fx jt ju fy jv jw fz jx ek\" data-selectable-paragraph=\"\">It may seem like an apples and oranges comparison, but combine these results with the data showing consumers don\u2019t change their reading habits much between home and work and it becomes more relevant.<\/p>\n<p id=\"1a07\" class=\"jm jy cf bk jo b fk jp jz fm jq ka jr js fx jt ju fy jv jw fz jx ek\" data-selectable-paragraph=\"\">As Mario Martinez writes in a readability report for Microsoft, \u201creports are both records of research and means of communicating.\u201d Your research results are valuable; make sure the right people find them, understand them, and use them to make a positive impact on your business.<\/p>\n<p id=\"125f\" class=\"lg ke cf bk bj kf lh li lj lk ll lm ln lo lp lq lr\"><strong class=\"ay\">What approach do you take when writing research reports? Did you learn anything from this article that you\u2019ll implement going forward? Tweet us <\/strong><a class=\"bx cv ji jj jk jl\" href=\"https:\/\/x.com\/MicrosoftRI\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener nofollow noreferrer\"><strong class=\"ay\">@MicrosoftRI<\/strong><\/a> or like us <a class=\"msr-external-link glyph-append glyph-append-open-in-new-tab glyph-append-xsmall\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\" target=\"_blank\" href=\"http:\/\/www.facebook.com\/MicrosoftRI\">on Facebook<span class=\"sr-only\"> (opens in new tab)<\/span><\/a> and join the conversation.<\/p>\n<p><em>Dylan Romero leads a writing team focused on designing seamless, cross-device experiences and infusing user research with empathy by default, contextual understanding, and voice.<\/em><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>People aren&#8217;t reading like they used to. Instead, they skim and search for keywords and phrases. 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